Blog comment Tim Wergeni Johansson

Is it clear what is done? Yes, you have clearly conveyed that you had a play-testing session where your gathered feedback. Is it clear how? To a lesser degree yes, the circumstances regarding how the play-testing was carried out is explained. Is it clear why? Yes, to gather feedback but perhaps not motivated very well, you could go into more detail on this. Is the post valuable? in my opinion not exactly, but that might just be because i value motivating and explaining more on the why part higher than is necessary. Can the post be improved? definitely, there are spelling errors, odd sentence structure and a word used that makes absolutely no sense in the context. On the other hand i do think your post contains everything necessary to cover the three pointers (what how why) well. But since the above mentioned errors contribute to conveying them clearly it can be really hard to tell. Do some spellchecking and try reading your own post out aloud before posting next time and you should be good 🙂
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